hmmm.
Hmm it might sound good and it's good to practice with Midis but I wouldn't submit them in as your own songs, I would say it's like pretty much submitting someone elses work up on here. I would say midis are tools and only tools to make songs.
I use midis sometimes to help me check for right notes in some hard melodies.
But that's pretty much it.
I wouldn't make too many songs using pure midis because like... it doesn't really need any skill and shows you're kind of lazy. Midis defeat the fun of actually trying to figure out the tune, and usually make you less interested in making the song.
About the sounds you used, I reckon the bell was fine, the percussion was pretty good. The main lead you used needed to be layered with another two or so leads to make it better. It sounded really plain. Also if you can, you need to learn how to add effects such as Reverb and Delay. It'll make everything sound much better.
But yeah, keep up the good work, try to make some more original stuff. It'll get you further than midis.
5/5 because I definitely had to bump it up from 0.74
2.37 / 5.00 (+1.63)
//Brando