Hmmm
I would have to say it's a different type of melody I'm used to. It's very abrupt and fast. It would be great to hear it finished, but I don't think this would be one of my absolute favorites. I'm used to the hard/trance/dance section of techno. I would find this hard to put into a genre.
I can't really see much that can be improved. Well good luck, finishing it.
Should go good. 4/5 8/10
-Cheers Brando