Nice work!
I saw this song up on you tube, thought I should leave a review here.
Hey man :D Nice work, sounds like a really great song!
Glad you're still up making great music. All the notes here seem fine, actually pretty perfect. Melody's great, nice and catchy. The piano breaks also really nice! It really got me moving to the music. It's great that you're mastering composition, get this right and you should eventually gain an ear for audio. It shouldn't be too far away.
The synths sound pretty good but at first I think the melody comes in too fast. Where you have the cut off at 0:24 up until 0:34. I think that intro was too fast. The kick for the melody comes in too early. Also I think the pitched bass at the start didn't really suit the song, If you were going to change it, I'd say change it to maybe a more softer trance bass like the one you have going through the melody.
The structure was good, no repetitiveness so that was a bigger plus.
Crowd was good in the background, I remember when I used to use crowds to make my music sound good, but then I gave up using crowds because they usually wrecked the moods I was aiming for. However, you used them right and it worked out heavily in your favor. Good work, keep it up!
And you might want to know this is the type of material that really should get into the top 5. Good work. There's always a few adjustments in songs, even in mine :S but yeah.
Keep it up!
-Cheers Brando