Nice song..
This has a nice atmosphere to it and a nice tune. I loved the effects and FX you used, the massive reverb sounded awesome and made the main synth really stick out amongst the crowd.
A very fast tempo and some really nice leads but i'll get straight to my point.
This sounds really repetitve to me. I think it might be because you didn't really progress the melody through, it just came in and stayed like that, then re appeared etc.
You had one melody through the song and I didn't see really much morphing of it that's why I say it sounds repetitve.
The kick was interesting.. as I said with the tempo it was a really fast song.. and the percussion was really insane, like the hats.. I think they were too loud for the song.. I don't quite know how to explain it. But they sounded mashed up.
I suppose it's not a bad thing but I would'nt personally use it.
The bell I thought was a good idea but it was heavily overused and got quite annoying. But in the end it was an alright song but I think you should have spent some more time on it.
I could hear that you were progressing a bit but it wasn't shown to be the main attraction. In the background there were changing sounds but you had to dig deep to notice it. You just need to figure out the volumes and balance of what you want shown and what not. Though from this you will learn and make even better songs.
Keep up the good work, although doesn't get my 10.
5'd
-Cheers Brando