Great work! You sure did it!
You made the 8 bar melody like I told you and it worked out great. Even that small change at the end still gives it the non repetitive touch because you're not listening to the same thing every 4 bars. The new melody you put in sounds like a true melody, you made it very well.
You put heaps of new effects which was great and the new bass also sounds good. I would say it's on its way to completion.
Good work Keep it up! 5/5
-Cheers Brando