Hey Ian ! :D
Sorry about the late reply to your pm. But hey here's the review you wanted :D
And also its gonna be a bit short today :D Gotta go sleep lol. XD
I liked :28 when the kick and lead came in, but when the clap came in, it sounded really out of place. I would try replacing it or if you like it just maybe layer it and reduce the volume a bit. It should sound much better that way. But besides the clap it's great :D
No real faults or flaws so yeah good work XD Keep it up!
5'd
-Cheers Brando