Loved it!
You got my 5 and 10! Hardstyle FTW
Love the start. The intro was the maddest shit.
<3 your kick and bass, and the use of scratches crashes and hard fx.
This makes me want to shuffle! But I've done enough shufflin for today lol. :P
Although I loved the intro, I'll get down and serious. I think the melody was a bit too.. melodic for the type of song you were introducing.
After a while of listening it sounds slightly better but I'll stick with my gut instinct.
I'll use SMF - Hahaha as an example. At the start he had a nice introduction coming along, then he brought in a nice hard lead, simple but hard.
You brought in a very nice introduction, then expanded the lead into a pretty nice subtune. Then you brought in the melody. I think there was too much to the melody, I know repetitive isn't usually a good thing but I think with hardstyle, it works out in favor.
Just repeating the first 4 bars of the melody and changing the 7th and 8th bars would be surely enough. The journey down to the lower notes kinda ruins the mood. Also you need some contrast in the melody and a always try a little bit of weirdness, gives your songs unique touch - and a chance to go far.
Liked it. Makes me think of Sarah & Pae shuffle.
Keep up the good work.
-Cheers Brando