pretty nice
With songs like these, you could get really popular in newgrounds.
Love it! Kick is overpowered but it's just great. Surely downloaded. Although at 1:58 where the slight breakbeat was introduced, I think you overdid the percussion in that section. Those snares of some sort were too.. umm.. confronting. The sounds you used were great but I didn't really like the layout of the whole song. If this song was set out properly, with usual intro, melody, break, melody, outro.
This would be great! Although at the moment it's a 7/10 4/5