This is much better than the original, although it isn't trance it's still good.
Great that you put percussion into this song, sounds way better. The saw you used for the main tune sounds good, sounds like something out of nexus. Although the internal effect the saw has made it sound bad, for example at 0:52 where the saw-main tune was introduced. There are more saws in nexus that sound similar to the one you used, maybe you should experiment with them. ;)
I'll give this 10/10 4/5
Maybe check out my songs, might be your style.
great song but...
This sounds great, love the trance. The piano melody kept me listening..
BUT where is the percussion?... hats, (i hear the kicks) but where's the claps, rides, crashes etc. (I think i heard some crashes but they were very quiet)
Without the percussion it makes your song very bleak.
Still overall sounds good, but there are corrections to be made in this song.
bit distorted =\ but still good
Yeah it's a bit distorted, the kick and the lead don't fully work together but, it's not my style I could be wrong =] Overall it's pretty good, there's some change in the tune so it's not so repetitive, but at the start change some of the melody so it leads up from an intro.
i know what u mean by distorted xD but...
at the time i've made this beat... my head was just
disoriented xD so i just made it without thinking O_o
drugs are baad xD
i'm gonna look what i can do at the intro...
thx 4 da review
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